Wednesday 29 February 2012

Rob Kirk's review in noteform

Rob Kirk

Best news show seen without question.

Successful because it was organised.

A lot of thought went into it.

Nichola directed very well - appreciated relation between gallery and presenters.

Very good

Co-ordination

Excellent

90% of good journalism is organisation, and we did that very well.

Content of bulletin was excellent. Headline sequence vibrant & effective.

Sheep headline and link were conflicting. Did not marry words with pictures as well as it could have.

Council services - OK story, but shots were weak.

Fluoride - Started very well craft-wise. Didn't say enough about advantages of fluoride.Imbalanced peace

Course cuts - graphics didn't work very well, it was a bit of a dull story.

Assault - intro & package didn't quite link together. Link talked about man's conviction, package about victim mostly.

Sports

Hockey - very good

All the sports worked very well

Robin Cousins - Ok, sound very good, but started quite oddly. Pictures did not match the words again.

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Very good, be proud, etc. Even with the same material it could have been better.

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